RE: "information resource"

I am satisfied with the changes proposed below; and again also
encourage acceptance/inclusion of the optional text in item #3.

Thanks,

Patrick


> -----Original Message-----
> From: www-tag-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:www-tag-request@w3.org]On Behalf Of
> ext Stuart Williams
> Sent: 22 September, 2004 12:18
> To: Stickler Patrick (Nokia-TP-MSW/Tampere)
> Cc: www-tag@w3.org
> Subject: Re: "information resource"
> 
> 
> 
> Patrick.Stickler@nokia.com wrote:
> 
> >Rather than simply saying "OK, that's good", in the interest of
> >keeping things crystal clear and avoiding any undue confusion,
> >can we be a bit pedantic here and can you resend the proposal
> >with the corrected wording, and then I can say "OK" to the
> >clean, corrected version?
> >
> >That should also provide for a better reference link as well.
> >
> >Patrick
> >  
> >
> 
> Sure... he goes...
> 
> 
> Corrected proposal (incorporating the sugestionfrom Walden 
> Mathews [1])
> 
> 1) Replace all occurences of the noun phrase "information 
> resource" with 
> the noun phrase "web resource".
> 
> 2) Replace the defining sentence for the noun phrase "information 
> resource" (section 3.1 1st para, 1st sentence) :
> 
> "The term Information Resource refers to resources that convey 
> information. Any resource that has a representation is an information 
> resource."
> 
> with
> 
> "The term Web Resource is applicable to resources for which web 
> acesssible representations are available and/or which may be 
> interacted 
> with through an exchange of representations. Any resource 
> that has a web 
> accessible  representation is an web resource."
> 
> 3) [Optional]  Consider adding a nearby sentence: "Colloquially, Web 
> Resources are said to be "on-the-web"."
> 
> Best regards
> 
> Stuart Williams
> -- 
> [1]  http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2004Sep/0142.html
> 
> 
>

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