RE: Comments on 18 September 2003 editors draft

Ok, try this on for size.  I like the flip, that helps.  I don't have much
control over the placement of the relationship text... Hopefully I can
figure it out.

I will observe for the record that I had made the holy trinity on the top
but you made me change it :-)

cheers,
Dave

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roy T. Fielding [mailto:fielding@apache.org]
> Sent: Friday, September 19, 2003 5:03 PM
> To: David Orchard
> Cc: www-tag@w3.org
> Subject: Re: Comments on 18 September 2003 editors draft
>
>
> On Friday, September 19, 2003, at 04:37  PM, David Orchard wrote:
> > Ian suggested that I send a png of my first cut at the web
> arch model,
> > so
> > here it is..
>
> It needs arrow-heads for the relationships, or at least a better font
> so that the operators are close enough to the line endings to make
> sense of directionality.  Also, it would read better if it were
> flipped left-to-right and Agent + Message were on the top row
> above URI + Resource + Representation.
>
> ....Roy
>
>