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Section 1.1 Characteristics of URIs: Minor editorial

From: Williams, Stuart <skw@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Date: Mon, 22 Jul 2002 19:05:11 +0100
Message-ID: <5E13A1874524D411A876006008CD059F04A06F7E@0-mail-1.hpl.hp.com>
To: "Tim Bray (E-mail)" <tbray@textuality.com>
Cc: "'www-tag@w3.org'" <www-tag@w3.org>

Tim,

Just taken a quick read through [1]. 

A little nit in section 1.1.1.1 (phew!):

  "Some URI schemes are used for identifying specific classes 
   of resources. For example, each TELNET URI represents a 
   telnet service and each MAILTO URI represents an electronic 
   mailbox."

The problem word "represents" occurs twice and might be better replaced with
"identifies" or "denotes".

Cheers

Stuart
[1] http://www.textuality.com/tag/s1.1.html
Received on Monday, 22 July 2002 14:05:47 GMT

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