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comments on Last Call Working Draft

From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@akamai.com>
Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2001 20:25:58 -0700
To: P3P Working Group <w3c-p3p-specification@w3.org>
Cc: www-p3p-public-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <20010928202546.B5224@akamai.com> 

Please find attached my comments for the P3P Last Call Working Draft
of 20010924.

Comments are in yellow (the 'mnotcomment' style sheet), editorial
suggestions in bright green (the 'mnoteditorial' style sheet). Most
are in sections 2 and 4, although there is one buried in the XML
Schema.

Cheers,

-- 
Mark Nottingham, Research Scientist
Akamai Technologies (San Mateo, CA USA)
Received on Friday, 28 September 2001 23:27:04 GMT

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