Re: comments on Last Call Working Draft

Forgot to say two things;

1. Sorry that I didn't supply these earlier, and

2. Well done, everyone!


Regards,


On Fri, Sep 28, 2001 at 08:25:58PM -0700, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> 
> Please find attached my comments for the P3P Last Call Working Draft
> of 20010924.
> 
> Comments are in yellow (the 'mnotcomment' style sheet), editorial
> suggestions in bright green (the 'mnoteditorial' style sheet). Most
> are in sections 2 and 4, although there is one buried in the XML
> Schema.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> -- 
> Mark Nottingham, Research Scientist
> Akamai Technologies (San Mateo, CA USA)



-- 
Mark Nottingham, Research Scientist
Akamai Technologies (San Mateo, CA USA)