RE: Comments on pre-CR draft

Thank you.  Please pardon my French.  We wanted to provide an
Internationalized example, but our French-speaking committee members were
not available near the deadline.  

The example itelf may change somewhat by the next draft, so I cannot
guarantee that this exact example (and hence your corrections) will be used,
but we will produce correct examples for the CR draft. 

Is that OK?

Thank you,
Leigh.


-----Original Message-----
From: François Yergeau [mailto:francois@yergeau.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, August 28, 2002 11:49 AM
To: www-forms-editor@w3.org
Subject: Comments on pre-CR draft




Dear XForms WG,

I'm looking at appendix G.1 of your pre-CR draft 
(http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-xforms-20020821/sliceG.html#xforms-in-xhtml-00
). 
  The French in the first example is not very good, here are some 
suggested fixes:

"Choisissez la méthode de paiement" -> "Choisissez un mode de paiement"

"Cash" -> "Comptant"

"Veuillez ne pas expédier l'argent comptant." -> "Ne pas envoyer 
d'argent comptant par la poste."

"Nombre de Carte de Banque" -> "Numéro de carte bancaire"

"Date d'échéance."  -> remove the final period.

"Achat" -> "Achetez"

-- 
François Yergeau