W3C home > Mailing lists > Public > www-archive@w3.org > April 2004

Re: Abstract etc.

From: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Date: Wed, 07 Apr 2004 15:26:35 +0100
Message-ID: <40740F9B.7050407@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
To: Patrick Stickler <patrick.stickler@nokia.com>
Cc: www-archive@w3.org, ext Chris Bizer <chris@bizer.de>, Pat Hayes <phayes@ihmc.us>

>> Abstract:
>>
>> The Semantic Web consists of many RDF graphs named
>> by URIs.
> 
> 
> Is this a widely accepted fact? Perhaps "The Semantic Web
> can be viewed as consisting of many RDF graphs named by
> URIs."
> 

That's stylistic ... anyone else care to comment?
I think I prefer starting with a supposedly objective statement that makes 
the reader the think; rather than merely stating a point of view. This 
sentence does summarize a significant chunk of the paper.

Jeremy
Received on Wednesday, 7 April 2004 10:28:30 GMT

This archive was generated by hypermail 2.2.0+W3C-0.50 : Wednesday, 7 November 2012 14:17:42 GMT