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Re: Abstract etc.

From: Patrick Stickler <patrick.stickler@nokia.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Apr 2004 08:11:35 +0300
Message-Id: <3535DF88-891B-11D8-8097-000A95EAFCEA@nokia.com>
Cc: www-archive@w3.org, ext Chris Bizer <chris@bizer.de>, Pat Hayes <phayes@ihmc.us>
To: "ext Jeremy Carroll" <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>


On Apr 07, 2004, at 17:26, ext Jeremy Carroll wrote:

>>> Abstract:
>>>
>>> The Semantic Web consists of many RDF graphs named
>>> by URIs.
>> Is this a widely accepted fact? Perhaps "The Semantic Web
>> can be viewed as consisting of many RDF graphs named by
>> URIs."
>
> That's stylistic ... anyone else care to comment?
> I think I prefer starting with a supposedly objective statement that 
> makes the reader the think; rather than merely stating a point of 
> view. This sentence does summarize a significant chunk of the paper.
>

I see your point. I'll leave it to your discretion.

Patrick


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Patrick Stickler
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