Hi Shadi, On 30 Jul 2008, at 18:11, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote: > > Consider "Device is *often* used ..." (added the word "often") or > similar so that the second sentence does not sound as absolute. OK, I also think adding "often" would be better. > > Do you mean to say "Blind or color blind users can't perceive > *color*" or "can't perceive *non-text content*" as opposed to just > "*content*"? I actually mean "non-text content" so I will change that. > Works much better but I wonder if the second sentence could be > split. For example to say "Mobile browsers can behave differently > to Desktop browsers, for example due to network and processing > capabilities. Auto-refreshed pages may also have cost implications > if they are left open or put unnoticed into the background." OK, this reads better so I will use this one. Regards, Yeliz.Received on Thursday, 31 July 2008 05:53:04 GMT
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