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Re: [wbs] Harvey Bingham response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Business Case Resource Suite'

From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2005 21:55:44 -0500
Message-ID: <4307ED30.50602@w3.org>
To: hbingham@acm.org
Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org

Hi, Harvey,

Thanks for your careful review and comments!

> Overview page
> Third paragraph, 
> This is the "Business Cased Overview" page, the first of a series of
> five pages, called a "resource suite" ...
> The other four pages are: 
>     Social Factors
>     Technical Factors
>     Financial Factors
>     Legal and Policy Factors
> This should avoid my confusion wondering what the other four pages are.

I tried a few different ways to address this, and they each seemed to defer attention away from the focus of that paragraph, which is to transition from a general definition of business case to introducing the general focus of this resource suite. I'm hoping that the bulleted list in the next section  and the list in the site navigation (left side) are  enough to show the other 4 pages.

> Technical Factors page
> Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
> Enable Content on Different Configurations.
> Not clear how one allows users and user agents to
> substitute a personal stylesheet. I'm not sure
> that has been adequately addressed in the User 
> Agent guidelines either. Currently, I believe a
> style sheet identified in the HTML wins. 
> Shouldn't have to undo that.

I assume this is a general comment, since I don't see how that would fit into the scope of this document to address.

> General comments on the resource suite as a whole
> This is a winner, long aborning, worth the wait.


~ Shawn
Received on Sunday, 21 August 2005 05:07:44 UTC

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