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Re: Call for Review: [Responding/Reporting doc] Approaching Organizations with Inaccessible Websites to Encourage Accessibility

From: Liam McGee <liam.mcgee@communis.co.uk>
Date: Wed, 02 Dec 2009 18:00:15 +0000
Message-ID: <4B16AB2F.9010703@communis.co.uk>
To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Definitely up to editor's discretion &/or can be addressed in a future 
version... but...

1. Title of the doc.
"Approaching Organizations with Inaccessible Websites to Encourage 
Accessibility"

Suggest change to

"How to complain about an inaccessible website"

or

"How to report an inaccessible website"

reasons: SOunds less as if designed by committee (yes, I know, I know). 
Simple English. Shorter. Contains words that reflect the user goals of 
the user reading the page. [ref: Reqs: Primary audience:
People wanting to report Web accessibility problems]

Otherwise, good to go.

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Liam McGee
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