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More mainly editorial changes

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Thu, 24 Nov 2005 12:53:19 +0100
Message-ID: <4385A9AF.1090403@gmx.de>
To: WebDAV <w3c-dist-auth@w3.org>
Hi,

the attached diffs (+ XML) implement some more mainly editorial 
enhancements I hope we can agree upon:

- update references that were outdated; some minor tweaks in citing the 
XML spec (it really doesn't need to be a reference every time we 
mentionn it, also point to the section for xml:lang explicitly)

- front matter: obsoletes RFC2518, fix title and abbreviated title

- intro: do not say "this draft"

- more broken XML fixed (I'm really getting tired having to fix those 
again and again)

- lock compatibility table made an RFC2629-style table

Best regards, Julian

Index: draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/xml2rfc/draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml,v
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diff -r1.10 draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml
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<   <!ENTITY rfc2069 PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2069.xml'>
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<   <!ENTITY rfc2279 PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2279.xml'>
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<   <!ENTITY rfc2376 PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2376.xml'>    
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<   <!ENTITY w3cXMLNS PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml4/reference.W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114.xml'>
<   <!ENTITY w3cXML PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml4/reference.W3C.REC-xml-20001006.xml'>
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< <rfc ipr="full3978" docName="draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest">
---
> <rfc ipr="full3978" docName="draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest" obsoletes="2518">
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< <title abbrev="RFC2518bis">
<   HTTP Extensions for Distributed Authoring - WebDAV RFC2518 bis
< </title>
---
> <title abbrev="WEBDAV">HTTP Extensions for Distributed Authoring - WebDAV</title>
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<    RFC2518 was published in February 1998, and this draft makes minor 
---
>    RFC2518 was published in February 1999, and this document makes minor 
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<    WebDAV uses <xref target="XML"/> for property names and some values, and also uses
---
>    WebDAV uses XML <xref target="REC-XML"/> for property names and some values, and also uses
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<    information either in an <xref target="XML"/> 
<    request entity body, or in an HTTP header.  The use of XML to encode 
---
>    information either in an XML request entity body, or in an HTTP header.  The use of XML to encode 
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<    The <xref target="W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114">XML namespace extension</xref> 
---
>    The XML namespace extension <xref target="REC-XML-NAMES"/> 
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<    XML parsers that are compliant with <xref target="XML"/> 
<    and <xref target="W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114">XML Namespaces</xref>.  All 
---
>    XML parsers that are compliant with <xref target="REC-XML"/> 
>    and <xref target="REC-XML-NAMES"/>.  All 
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<       <figure>
---
>       <texttable>
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<     
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<        <artwork>
<     
<      Current State   Shared Lock Request   Exclusive Lock Request 
<    ----------------------------------------------------------------
<      None            True                  True 
<      Shared Lock     True                  False 
<      Exclusive Lock  False                 False* 
<     
<        </artwork>
---
>       <ttcol width="40%">Current lock state / Lock request</ttcol><ttcol>Shared Lock</ttcol><ttcol>Exclusive Lock</ttcol>
>       <c>None</c><c>True</c><c>True</c>
>       <c>Shared Lock</c><c>True</c><c>False</c>
>       <c>Exclusive Lock</c><c>False</c><c>False*</c>
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<      </figure>
<      
---
>      </texttable>
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<     
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<           <D:href>urn:uuid:e71d4fae-5dec-22d6-fea5-00a0c91e6be4<
<           /D:href> 
---
>           <D:href
>           >urn:uuid:e71d4fae-5dec-22d6-fea5-00a0c91e6be4</D:href> 
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<           >http://example.com/workspace/webdav/proposal.doc<
<           /D:href> 
---
>           >http://example.com/workspace/webdav/proposal.doc</D:href> 
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<    <xref target="XML"/>. The 
---
>    <xref target="REC-XML"/>. The 
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<    declaration using the format defined in <xref target="XML"/>. 
---
>    declaration using the format defined in <xref target="REC-XML"/>. 
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<    encoded, at minimum, using the UTF-8 <xref target="RFC2279"/> and UTF-16 encodings of 
---
>    encoded, at minimum, using the UTF-8 <xref target="RFC3629"/> and UTF-16 encodings of 
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<    Content-Type header, as defined in <xref target="RFC2376"/>, as well as the XML 
---
>    Content-Type header, as defined in <xref target="RFC3023"/>, as well as the XML 
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<    language of its content and attributes. See <xref target="XML"/> for 
---
>    language of its content and attributes. See Section 2.12 of <xref target="REC-XML"/> for 
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<    strongly encouraged to read "XML Media Types" <xref target="RFC2376"/> for 
---
>    strongly encouraged to read "XML Media Types" <xref target="RFC3023"/> for 
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<    <xref target="RFC2376"/>) also apply to WebDAV. In 
---
>    <xref target="RFC3023"/>) also apply to WebDAV. In 
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<    <xref target="RFC2069"/>. Since Digest authentication verifies that both parties to 
---
>    <xref target="RFC2617"/>. Since Digest authentication verifies that both parties to 
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<    section 4.2.2 of <xref target="XML"/>, which instruct an XML processor to 
---
>    Section 4.2.2 of <xref target="REC-XML"/>, which instruct an XML processor to 
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<    XML processor to the security risks discussed in <xref target="RFC2376"/>. 
---
>    XML processor to the security risks discussed in <xref target="RFC3023"/>. 
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<     &rfc2069;
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<     &rfc2279;
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<     &w3cXMLNS;
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< <reference anchor="XML" target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xml-20040204">
<   <front>
<     <title>Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)</title>
<     <author initials="T." surname="Bray" fullname="Tim Bray">
<       <organization>Textuality and Netscape</organization>
---
>   <reference anchor="REC-XML" target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xml-20040204">
>     <front>
>       <title>Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)</title>
>       <author initials="T." surname="Bray" fullname="Tim Bray">
>         <organization>Textuality and Netscape</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>tbray@textuality.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="J." surname="Paoli" fullname="Jean Paoli">
>         <organization>Microsoft</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>jeanpa@microsoft.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="C.M." surname="Sperberg-McQueen" fullname="C. M. Sperberg-McQueen">
>         <organization>University of Illinois at Chicago and Text Encoding Initiative</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>cmsmcq@uic.edu</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="E." surname="Maler" fullname="Eve Maler">
>         <organization>Sun Microsystems</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>eve.maler@east.sun.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="F." surname="Yergeau" fullname="Francois Yergeau">
>         <organization/>
>         <address>
>           <email>francois@yergeau.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <date day="4" month="February" year="2004"/>
>     </front>
>     <seriesInfo name="W3C" value="REC-xml-20040204"/>
>   </reference>
>       
>   <reference anchor="REC-XML-NAMES" target="http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xml-names-19990114">
>     <front>
>       <title>Namespaces in XML</title>
>       <author initials="T." surname="Bray">
>       	<organization>Textuality</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>tbray@textuality.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="D." surname="Hollander">
>       	<organization>Hewlett-Packard Company</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>dmh@corp.hp.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="A." surname="Layman">
>       	<organization>Microsoft</organization>
>         <address>
>           <email>andrewl@microsoft.com</email>
>         </address>
>       </author>
>       <date month="January" year="1999" />
>     </front>
>     <seriesInfo name="W3C" value="REC-xml-names-19990114" />
>   </reference>
> 
>   <reference anchor="RFC2617">
>     <front>
>     <title abbrev="HTTP Authentication">HTTP Authentication: Basic and Digest Access Authentication</title>
>     <author initials="J." surname="Franks" fullname="John Franks">
>       <organization>Northwestern University, Department of Mathematics</organization>
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<         <email>tbray@textuality.com</email>
---
>         <email>john@math.nwu.edu</email>
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<     <author initials="J." surname="Paoli" fullname="Jean Paoli">
<       <organization>Microsoft</organization>
---
>     <author initials="P.M." surname="Hallam-Baker" fullname="Phillip M. Hallam-Baker">
>       <organization>Verisign Inc.</organization>
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<         <email>jeanpa@microsoft.com</email>
---
>         <email>pbaker@verisign.com</email>
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<     <author initials="C.M." surname="Sperberg-McQueen" fullname="C. M. Sperberg-McQueen">
<       <organization>University of Illinois at Chicago and Text Encoding Initiative</organization>
---
>     <author initials="J.L." surname="Hostetler" fullname="Jeffery L. Hostetler">
>     <organization>AbiSource, Inc.</organization>
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<         <email>cmsmcq@uic.edu</email>
---
>         <email>jeff@AbiSource.com</email>
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<     <author initials="E." surname="Maler" fullname="Eve Maler">
<       <organization>Sun Microsystems</organization>
---
>     <author initials="S.D." surname="Lawrence" fullname="Scott D. Lawrence">
>       <organization>Agranat Systems, Inc.</organization>
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<         <email>eve.maler@east.sun.com</email>
---
>         <email>lawrence@agranat.com</email>
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<     <author initials="F." surname="Yergeau" fullname="Francois Yergeau">
<       <organization/>
---
>     <author initials="P.J." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach">
>       <organization>Microsoft Corporation</organization>
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<         <email>francois@yergeau.com</email>
---
>         <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email>
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<     <date day="4" month="February" year="2004"/>
<   </front>
<   <seriesInfo name="W3C" value="REC-xml-20040204"/>
< </reference>
<     
---
>     <author initials="A." surname="Luotonen" fullname="Ari Luotonen">
>       <organization>Netscape Communications Corporation</organization>
>     </author>
>     <author initials="L." surname="Stewart" fullname="Lawrence C. Stewart">
>       <organization>Open Market, Inc.</organization>
>       <address>
>         <email>stewart@OpenMarket.com</email>
>       </address>
>     </author>
>     <date month="June" year="1999"/>
>     </front>
>     <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2617"/>
>   </reference>
>   
>   <reference anchor="RFC3023">
>     <front>
>       <title>XML Media Types</title>
>       <author initials="M." surname="Makoto" fullname="Murata Makoto">
>         <organization>IBM Tokyo Research Laboratory</organization>
>         <address><email>mmurata@trl.ibm.co.jp</email></address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="S." surname="St.Laurent" fullname="Simon St.Laurent">
>         <organization>simonstl.com</organization>
>         <address><email>simonstl@simonstl.com</email></address>
>       </author>
>       <author initials="D." surname="Kohn" fullname="Dan Kohn">
>         <organization>Skymoon Ventures</organization>
>         <address><email>dan@dankohn.com</email></address>
>       </author>
>       <date month="January" year="2001"/>
>     </front>
>     <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3023"/>
>   </reference>
> 
>   <reference anchor="RFC3629">
>     <front>
>       <title>UTF-8, a transformation format of ISO 10646</title>
>       <author initials="F." surname="Yergeau" fullname="F. Yergeau">
>         <organization>Alis Technologies</organization>
>         <address><email>fyergeau@alis.com</email></address>
>       </author>
>       <date month="November" year="2003"/>
>     </front>
>     <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3629"/>
>     <seriesInfo name="STD" value="63"/>
>   </reference>
> 
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<      &rfc2376;


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