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Re: New editor's draft

From: Henry S. Thompson <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk>
Date: Fri, 06 Jan 2012 17:01:59 +0000
To: Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com>
Cc: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
Message-ID: <f5bd3awhiig.fsf@calexico.inf.ed.ac.uk>
Norman Walsh writes:

> 1. Jim provided revised PNG and SVG diagrams with colors more
>    appropriate for folks with restricted color vision.

Good.

> 2. I added links to the PNG and SVG diagrams to the paragraph
>    preceding the diagram.

Good.

> 3. I added a note following the diagram to explain the unlabelled
>    "Full Profile" circle.

OK in principle.  In practice, there _is_ no "'XInclude' class".  I'm
afraid you need something parallel to the "Perform ID..." prose which
currently decorates the pale-green circle.  Something such as "Perform
XInclude processing".

> If no one objects, this is the draft that I will format as a new LCWD
> for publication next week.

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