- From: Henry S. Thompson <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk>
- Date: Fri, 06 Jan 2012 17:01:59 +0000
- To: Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com>
- Cc: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
Norman Walsh writes:
> 1. Jim provided revised PNG and SVG diagrams with colors more
> appropriate for folks with restricted color vision.
Good.
> 2. I added links to the PNG and SVG diagrams to the paragraph
> preceding the diagram.
Good.
> 3. I added a note following the diagram to explain the unlabelled
> "Full Profile" circle.
OK in principle. In practice, there _is_ no "'XInclude' class". I'm
afraid you need something parallel to the "Perform ID..." prose which
currently decorates the pale-green circle. Something such as "Perform
XInclude processing".
> If no one objects, this is the draft that I will format as a new LCWD
> for publication next week.
ht
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