Re: Yet another draft

A few editorial comments based on a quick reading of the spec:


1) Figures 1 and 2 should have a white background instead of transparent 
(i've printed the spec and they appear as black boxes - strictly speaking).

2) On 3.2 (For-Each), the last paragraph states "... a sequence of 
DocBook chapters ...". Should there be a (non-normative) reference to 
DocBook here?

3) Appendix A.4 (Component Declarations), I believe it should be erased, 
as A.1, A.2, and A.3 provide all component declarations.


That's all for now.
Cheers,

Rui



Norman Walsh wrote:
> Alex checked in a revised Standard Component Library appendix so
> the draft at
> 
>   http://www.w3.org/XML/XProc/docs/langspec.html
> 
> has been updated.
> 
>                                         Be seeing you,
>                                           norm
>