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Re: Yet another draft

From: Norman Walsh <Norman.Walsh@Sun.COM>
Date: Thu, 15 Mar 2007 16:13:40 -0400
To: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
Message-ID: <876492s1sb.fsf@nwalsh.com>
/ Rui Lopes <rlopes@di.fc.ul.pt> was heard to say:
| A few editorial comments based on a quick reading of the spec:
| 1) Figures 1 and 2 should have a white background instead of
| transparent (i've printed the spec and they appear as black boxes -
| strictly speaking).

Yeah, thanks. That's an irritating feature of inkscape.

| 2) On 3.2 (For-Each), the last paragraph states "... a sequence of
| DocBook chapters ...". Should there be a (non-normative) reference to
| DocBook here?

I just took out the reference.

| 3) Appendix A.4 (Component Declarations), I believe it should be
| erased, as A.1, A.2, and A.3 provide all component declarations.

I think it might be handy to have them all in one place, but point

                                        Be seeing you,

Norman Walsh
XML Standards Architect
Sun Microsystems, Inc.

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