Re: Yet another draft

/ Rui Lopes <rlopes@di.fc.ul.pt> was heard to say:
| A few editorial comments based on a quick reading of the spec:
|
| 1) Figures 1 and 2 should have a white background instead of
| transparent (i've printed the spec and they appear as black boxes -
| strictly speaking).

Yeah, thanks. That's an irritating feature of inkscape.

| 2) On 3.2 (For-Each), the last paragraph states "... a sequence of
| DocBook chapters ...". Should there be a (non-normative) reference to
| DocBook here?

I just took out the reference.

| 3) Appendix A.4 (Component Declarations), I believe it should be
| erased, as A.1, A.2, and A.3 provide all component declarations.

I think it might be handy to have them all in one place, but point
taken.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

-- 
Norman Walsh
XML Standards Architect
Sun Microsystems, Inc.