Re: IRI document including LEIRI and HREF (Web Address)

Grosso, Paul scripsit:
> I compared section 7 of
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-duerst-iri-bis-06
> with http://www.w3.org/TR/leiri/ and only found the
> following editorial nits:
> 
> 1.  In section 7.3, whereas most codepoint references are of
>     the form U+XXXX, "The controls" characters use a form
>     such as #x0 - #x1F, and the "Surrogate code units" use
>     D800-DFFF.
> 
> 2.  Under "The controls" is the non-work "alltogether" that
>     should be "altogether".  [This glitch is also present in
>     our LEIRI Note.]

A few more:

3) "Legacy Extedend IRIs" in the intro to 7.3

4) for "have been excluded" read "were excluded" under "Unwise characters" in 7.3

> I reported these nits to 'public-iri@w3.org'.

I will do so too.

> 
> But it would still be good if someone else could also review 
> section 7 of this IRI-bis draft.

I don't see anything else.

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