Re: 8832 - repeating text

Not hearing any objection - it is done.

thanks
-Doug
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Doug Davis/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS 
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04/27/2010 08:33 AM

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8832 - repeating text







While adding the resolution of 8832 to wseventing I noticed that we now 
repeat ourselves.  In section 4 we now say: 
        When processing a Renew, GetStatus or Unsubscribe operation, a 
Subscription Manager MUST generate 
        an wse:UnknownSubscription fault if it determines that the 
subscription is invalid. 

We also say this same thing in Renew, GetStatus and Unsubscribe: 
        If the request message reaches a conformant implementation of 
WS-Eventing and the message refers to 
        an unknown subscription, then the implemention MUST generate a 
wse:UnknownSubscription fault. 

Seems a bit redundant.  Is there any objection to removing duplicate text 
from Renew, GetStatus and Unsubscribe as an editorial task? 

thanks
-Doug
______________________________________________________
STSM |  Standards Architect  |  IBM Software Group
(919) 254-6905  |  IBM 444-6905  |  dug@us.ibm.com
The more I'm around some people, the more I like my dog.