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Re: issue 8273: proposal for WS-Eventing

From: Li, Li (Li) <lli5@avaya.com>
Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2010 10:41:29 -0400
Message-ID: <7DC6C0F0E8D7C74FB4E1E73CC371280A01718609@300813ANEX2.global.avaya.com>
To: <public-ws-resource-access@w3.org>
Cc: "Chou, Wu (Wu)" <wuchou@avaya.com>

Thanks for the proposal. We agree the general technical content but have
the following editorial changes to

1) avoid introducing new concepts that are already defined in WS-E, such
as "notification stream", "entity", "source owner" and "sink owner" etc.
2) remove some advices that are either well-known or too specific (to be
specific on threats, but general on solutions).
3) Clarify some statements (e.g. per-notification authorization).
4) shorten some sentences without changing their meaning.

The attached word document, which a copy of Ram's version, has our
change marks. 


Wu, Li

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