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ISSUE: [Primer] 5036 " Editorial change proposals for the primer"

From: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 12 Sep 2007 17:41:19 +0900
Message-ID: <46E7A62F.2020908@w3.org>
To: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <public-ws-policy@w3.org>

See also http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5036 .

Target: Primer

Description: Editorial change proposals for the primer.

Sec. 2.1:
"Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, 
ExactlyOne
and PolicyReference - and one attribute - wsp:Optional." to
"Policy is a simple language that has four elements - Policy, All, 
ExactlyOne
and PolicyReference - and two attributes - wsp:Optional and wsp:Ignorable."
Sec. 2.2:
"Child elements of the Policy element are policy assertions." to
"Child elements of the Policy element that are not from the Policy namespace
are policy assertions."
Sec. 2.8:
"both "optional" and "Ignorable" to
both "Optional" and "Ignorable" (upper case for "Optional")
"@wsp:optional=true" to "@wsp:Optional=true"
Sec. 2.10:
"the wsu:Id xml:id and Name attributes." to
"the wsu:Id, xml:id and Name attributes."
"complicated policy scenerios" to "complicated policy scenarios"
"parametrized" to "parameterized"
Sec. 2.12:
"As you have seen, Web Services Policy is a simple language that has four
elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and one attribute -
wsp:Optional. " to
"As you have seen, Web Services Policy is a simple language that has four
elements - Policy, All, ExactlyOne and PolicyReference - and two 
attributes -
wsp:Optional and wsp:Ignorable. "
Sec. 3.2:
"These alternatives map to bullets (a) through (d) above." to
"These alternatives map to list items (1) through (4) above."
Sec. 3.3.:
"view policy as an unordered collection" to
"view a policy as an unordered collection"
Sec. 3.4.1:
"how the normal-form of a policy expression relate" to
"how the normal-form of a policy expression relates"
Sec. 4.1:
"The default value for wsp:Optional="false"." to
"The default value for wsp:Optional is "false"."
App. C:
The reference to ws-addr-metadata needs to be updated.

Felix
Received on Wednesday, 12 September 2007 08:41:39 UTC

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