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NEW ISSUE: 3982 [Guidelines] The introduction should state that the document only targets policy assertion authors

From: Daniel Roth <Daniel.Roth@microsoft.com>
Date: Fri, 17 Nov 2006 17:40:34 -0800
To: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <public-ws-policy@w3.org>
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http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3982

Title: [Guidelines] The introduction should state that the document only targets policy assertion authors

Description: The introduction to the Guidelines document currently contains a bulleted list to describe the target audience [1].  This list includes policy expression authors, policy assertion authors, consumers and providers.  The document is intended to provide guidance for assertion authors; the additional target audiences should be removed.

Justification: The introduction to the Guidelines document should be clear about who the content is relevant to.

Target: Guidelines for Assertion Authors

Proposal: Remove the unnecessary bullet points and rewrite the third to last paragraph in the introduction as shown in the attachment

[1] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.html?rev=1.8&content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#introduction




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