Right now, it looks like the abstracts all start with the same text and then have a custom sentence or two. As a reader, I find that awkward (doing the diff in my head), and I think it short-changes the differences between the documents. Let's have each abstract be two paragraphs, where the first paragraph is shared among all the documents (we can make it a wiki page, Shared_Abstract and just template-include it) and the second paragraph is custom for that document. And the second paragraph should be a few well-thought-out sentences. (eg, unlike in XML Serialization where it is "This document specifies an XML exchange syntax for OWL 1.1." :-) -- SandroReceived on Wednesday, 26 March 2008 15:23:37 GMT
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