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Re: CR Request Updated

From: Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hpl.hp.com>
Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2007 12:04:48 +0100
Message-ID: <462F35D0.9090607@hpl.hp.com>
To: Harry Halpin <hhalpin@ibiblio.org>
CC: public-grddl-wg <public-grddl-wg@w3.org>


This looks OK to me, but I am unfamiliar with the genre.

Two comment:
i)
The last para seems to have the library as a document.
Suggested change:
old
[[
Note that also the GRDDL WG has produced a Test Cases, a Use-Case 
Scenario, and Standard Library of Transforms, and a GRDDL Primer. 
However, all of these documents currently exist as Working Drafts or 
Notes, and we believe by the time that Gleaning Resource Descriptions 
from Dialects of Languages (GRDDL) reaches Proposed Recommendation 
status, all of these documents will be complete and our charter will be 
fulfilled.
]]
new
[[
The GRDDL WG has produced three other documents Test Cases, a Use-Case 
Scenario, and a GRDDL Primer, and also a  Standard Library of 
Transforms. All of these documents currently exist as Working Drafts or 
Notes, and we believe by the time that Gleaning Resource Descriptions 
from Dialects of Languages (GRDDL) reaches Proposed Recommendation 
status, all of these deliverables will be complete and our charter will 
be fulfilled.
]]

ii)
The html title is incorrect.

Jeremy


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