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WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

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Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 03:47:41 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Judy Brewer
Email: jbrewer@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group
Document: W2
Item Number: intro
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The fourth bulleted item (\"How to meet\" links to information on intent..\") is hard to parse

Proposed Change:
Re-word the fourth bulleted item for readability, for instance \"Each success criteria contains links to how to meet that criteria\"
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