Name: Judy Brewer Email: jbrewer@w3.org Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group Document: W2 Item Number: new-terms Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): The penultimate paragraph (\"Several success criteria require...\") is difficult to understand and contains more detail than seems necessary or appropriate for an introduction. Proposed Change: Copyedit to clarify and simplify.Received on Friday, 23 June 2006 03:54:48 GMT
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