WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

Name: Shawn Henry
Email: shawn@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C WAI
Document: W2
Item Number: (none selected)
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Comment Type: general comment
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Editorial suggestions for http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG20/guidelines.html 

Proposed Change:


Consider:

* Move <h1> before the Contents list

* Delete “WCAG 2.0 Guidelines” at the top, which links to itself and is redundant with <title> and <h1>

* Remove line under from “Quick Table of Contents” and change to something like “Page Contents”

* In “This section is normative.” sentence, link “normative” to glossary definition.

* Re-consider this <title> and <h1> in relationship with http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG20/Overview.html <title> and <h1>

* When there are no Success Criteria at a level, combine the current heading and sentence into a single heading, e.g.:

instead of: 

<h4>Level 2 Success Criteria for Guideline 1.1

<p>(No level 2 success criteria for this guideline.)

have:

<h4>(No Level 2 Success Criteria for Guideline 1.1)

* Put “See also” links in regular font style, not italic (rationale: simplify visual design).  (example: “For multimedia, see also Guideline 1.2 Provide synchronized alternatives for multimedia.”)

* Consider putting the referenced terms in regular font style, not italic (rationale: simplify visual design).  consider using standard link colours for terms

* Consider putting the success criteria numbers in regular font style, not italic (rationale: simplify visual design)