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Re: p3-payload proofreading

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Tue, 02 Feb 2010 13:21:17 +0100
Message-ID: <4B6818BD.3070101@gmx.de>
To: Anthony Bryan <anthonybryan@gmail.com>
CC: HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Anthony Bryan wrote:
> 1) This read a bit awkward. I'm not sure if my suggestion retains the
> original meaning.
> 
> OLD
> There may exist multiple representations associated with a particular
> response status.
> 
> NEW
> It is possible for multiple representations to be associated with a
> particular response status.

The definitions of entity/representation/whatnot are on the TODO list 
anyway.

That being said, how about:

"Multiple representations may associated with a particular response status."

> 2) I think this means "*" for subtype, for example "text/*" and not
> literally "type/*". (While we literally mean "*/*").  Maybe because
> this comes directly after the ABNF it is fine?
> 
> The asterisk "*" character is used to group media types into ranges,
> with "*/*" indicating all media types and "type/*" indicating all
> subtypes of that type.

I'm not sure what this refers to; could you please supply some context?

> 3) Capitalize W?
> 
> OLD
> Note: while the definition of Content-MD5
> 
> NEW
> Note: While the definition of Content-MD5

Yup. I just did that for all parts 
(<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/756>).

Best regards, Julian
Received on Tuesday, 2 February 2010 12:21:54 GMT

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