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From: Anthony Bryan <anthonybryan@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Feb 2010 19:45:29 -0500
Message-ID: <bb9e09ee1002011645j6092d23anb4cacbb0068a2ffc@mail.gmail.com>
To: HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
1) This read a bit awkward. I'm not sure if my suggestion retains the
original meaning.

OLD
There may exist multiple representations associated with a particular
response status.

NEW
It is possible for multiple representations to be associated with a
particular response status.

2) I think this means "*" for subtype, for example "text/*" and not
literally "type/*". (While we literally mean "*/*").  Maybe because
this comes directly after the ABNF it is fine?

The asterisk "*" character is used to group media types into ranges,
with "*/*" indicating all media types and "type/*" indicating all
subtypes of that type.

3) Capitalize W?

OLD
Note: while the definition of Content-MD5

NEW
Note: While the definition of Content-MD5


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