- From: <raf@raf.org>
- Date: Wed, 16 Oct 2013 00:43:53 +0000
- To: xmlp-comments@w3.org
Hi, Here are some minor typographical/grammatical errors in the SOAP 1.2 primer. Section 1, paragraph 6 Section 4, paragraph 11 Example 9, caption Example 10, caption Example 13, caption Inconsistent indefinite article use with "HTTP". These paragraphs and captions use "an HTTP". There are 5 uses of "an HTTP" altogether in this document and 26 uses of "a HTTP". Setion 1, paragraph 6 Section 5.3, paragraph 2 Incorrect number agreement(?): "for certain type of content" should either be "for certain types of content" or "for a certain type of content" depending on which is meant. Section 1, paragraph 7 Missing space character in "[XOP]defines". The surrounding paragraphs have a space between their corresponding references and the word "defines" or "describes". Section 4.1, paragraph 1 Incorrect tense: "can chose" should be "can choose". Regards, raf
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