Editorial LC comments on MTOM

• From: Jacek Kopecky <jacek.kopecky@deri.at>
• Date: Fri, 18 Jun 2004 18:39:34 +0200
• To: XMLP Comments <xmlp-comments@w3.org>
• Message-Id: <1087576774.3043.63.camel@Kalb>

Hi, here are my editorial comments on the MTOM LC draft:

1) just before section 2.3.2 add text ...MUST not be optimized >>by
implementations of this feature<<

2) 2.3.2 should say "should generate a fault" instead of "should fault"

3) 4.3.1.1 content-tranfer-encoding - missing 's' in transfer

4) 4.3.2 2nd paragraph says "The remaining of this section describes the
perturbations", first it should be the "remainder", second there seem to
be such formal perturbations, like the ones described in the table in
4.3.1.1

Best regards,

                   Jacek Kopecky

                   Ph.D. researcher
                   Digital Enterprise Research Institute
                   http://www.deri.at/

Received on Friday, 18 June 2004 12:39:41 UTC