- From: <Svgdeveloper@aol.com>
- Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2003 06:58:31 EDT
- To: xml-names-editor@w3.org
Received on Sunday, 3 August 2003 06:58:42 UTC
I would suggest that the introductory section in "Motivation and Summary" be redrafted. The second sentence of paragraph 1 is unclear and the flow of ideas in the introductory section would be better if that sentence were deleted and the first sentence of paragraph 1 were followed by the first sentence in paragraph 2. One motivation is mentioned in the text. If there is a plural number of motivations what are the other motivations and why aren't they stated? Reference is also made to "element names". The terms used in the XML 1.0 Rec is "element type" or "element type name". Wouldn't it be better to use terms consistently between W3C specifications? Andrew Watt
Received on Sunday, 3 August 2003 06:58:42 UTC