- From: Amir Herzberg <AMIR@newgenpay.com>
- Date: Wed, 5 Sep 2001 11:51:34 +0300
- To: "Xml Encrypt (E-mail)" <xml-encryption@w3.org>
In draft 1.44, section 3.2, the `nonce paragraph`, there are some minor typos: 1. Space missing in `optionalNonce`; also notice wrong font after `Nonce`. 2. Comma missing: s/know the data's structure applications are RECOMMENDED/know the data's structure, applications are RECOMMENDED/ 3. A small non-typo comment... I think the term `varied data` is not clear enough so I suggest s/applications are RECOMMENDED to encrypt data that is varied/applications are RECOMMENDED to encrypt data with high entropy/ Best regards, Amir Herzberg CTO, NewGenPay Inc. http://www.newgenpay.com/Amir/Herzberg.htm SMS (urgent only!): _subject_ of email to aherzberg@walla.co.il
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