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minor typos/fixes to text for Nonce

From: Amir Herzberg <AMIR@newgenpay.com>
Date: Wed, 5 Sep 2001 11:51:34 +0300
Message-ID: <078EE8822DCFD411AAA1000629D56ADC0B7EC4@IMP01>
To: "Xml Encrypt (E-mail)" <xml-encryption@w3.org>
In draft 1.44, section 3.2, the `nonce paragraph`, there are some minor

1. Space missing in `optionalNonce`; also notice wrong font after `Nonce`. 

2. Comma missing:
s/know the data's structure applications are RECOMMENDED/know the data's
structure, applications are RECOMMENDED/

3. A small non-typo comment... I think the term `varied data` is not clear
enough so I suggest
s/applications are RECOMMENDED to encrypt data that is varied/applications
are RECOMMENDED to encrypt data with high entropy/

Best regards, 
Amir Herzberg
CTO, NewGenPay Inc.  
SMS (urgent only!): _subject_ of email to aherzberg@walla.co.il
Received on Wednesday, 5 September 2001 04:52:00 UTC

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