Minor stuff on Encryption Drafts

When printed to paper, many lines of sample or schema XML are truncated.

Section 3.6: "identies" -> "identifies".

Second paragraph above the 5.2.1 heading: "os" -> "so".

Section 5.4.2, just after the example: "CipherData" -> "CipherValue".

Section 5.5:
  In the first example, replace "sha256" with "sha1".
  Later, in 5.5.2, after the example, delete "(Add example with real "bits...")" and further down, after the definition of how to calculate KM and the definitions of term in that equation, replace the next 4 paragraphs (From "For example, the initial (KM(1))..." through "to be added...)" with the text appended to the bottom of this message.

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For example, the initial (KM(1)) calculation for the EncryptedData example in Section 5.5 above would be as follows, where "0x01" represents the byte counter value of 1, ZZ is the shared secret, and "foo" is the base64 decoding of "Zm9v".

	SHA-1 ( Example:Block/AlgZZ0x01foo80 )

Assuming that ZZ is 0xDEADBEEF, that would be

	SHA-1 ( 0x4578616D706C652F416C67DEADBEEF01666F6F3830 )

whose value is

	0x606F9961E4CEFB12416FAB0FCC9377FF06EDC87