- From: David Orchard <dorchard@bea.com>
- Date: Wed, 16 May 2007 12:35:39 -0700
- To: <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
- Cc: <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
Hi Noah, We did your first 2 comments, we think the 3rd one is overtaken by events, and we had a recollection that we'd have one table given that the table is simpler than before. The latest version of the doc is at http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/6/soap12-part3-20070516.html Please let us know if you have any dissatisfaction with our handling of your comments, Cheers, Dave on behalf of XMLP > -----Original Message----- > From: noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com [mailto:noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com] > Sent: Friday, May 04, 2007 12:30 PM > To: David Orchard > Cc: xml-dist-app@w3.org > Subject: Re: Checked in soap 1.2 part 3 > > Hi Dave. Mostly this looks very good to me, modulo the fact > that I've never been thrilled about including the multicast > in this. Anyway, here are a few more specific comments: > > ============ > > A receiver might, in exceptional circumstances, treat as > erroneous, or > lost, a message that has been received intact. > > That "might" seems odd given our use of RFC 2119 terminology > elsewhere. I > wonder whether that might better be phrased as: > > A receiver MAY (though typically only in exceptional > circumstances) treat > as erroneous, or lost, a message that has been received intact. > ============ > > (editorial) I'm not 100% sure, but I think it's preferred to say > "binding-specific" rather than "binding specific". > > Anyway, paragraphs 2 & 3 of section 2.2 are inconsistent on > this. Probably > you should do it one way throughout. > > ============ > > Determination of abnormal operation is outside the scope of this > specification. > > Might it be more appropriate to say that: > > "Except insofar as certain error processing is required or > suggested by > the use of the SOAP processing model, determination of > abnormal operation > is outside the scope of this specification." > > I think, for example, that faulting on an mU header you don't > recognize is > required. Though the details are in SOAP Part 1, this MEP > normatively > appeals to use of that. > > ============ > > Editorial: long ago and far away, when I was in the > workgroup, I thought > we were leaning toward splitting the table in 2.3 into two > tables, one for > sender and one for receiver. That seems to me to make > clearer that the > properties really do apply to one or the other, but never > both. I can > certainly live with what you have if you prefer. > > While it's always nice to hear from you all again, I don't need any > explicit followup on these points. They are offered for your > consideration in case you all find them helpful. So, if you > decide for > your own reasons to open formal issues to track any of them, > that's up to > you, but you don't need to respond formally with dispositions on my > account. > > Thanks! I hope I'll be seeing some of you in Banff next week. > > Noah > > -------------------------------------- > Noah Mendelsohn > IBM Corporation > One Rogers Street > Cambridge, MA 02142 > 1-617-693-4036 > -------------------------------------- > > > > >
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