RE: Status and links to Part 3

In the next rev, I've done the 1st and 3rd bullets.  

But I don't see the problem in firefox that you do.  I've tried with
firefox 1.5.0.1 and 1.5.0.2 on Win XP and 1.5.0.4 Server 2003.  My view
is that the breaks should only be on whitespace.  The property URIs are
never broken, just the text in the description.  I did see that the Part
2 Rec has a weird line break in firefox on the description of MEP name.
Perhaps a screen shot or refined description might help me?

Cheers,
Dave

PS. Did you check your 2006/02/13 update to xmlspec.xsl into the
mainline or is it a TAG specific version?  I'm getting bibl formatting
that I'm not liking - title hyperlinked followed by (see xyz) where xyz
isn't hyperlinked.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com [mailto:noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com]
> Sent: Thursday, July 20, 2006 1:35 PM
> To: David Orchard
> Cc: xml-dist-app@w3.org
> Subject: Re: Status and links to Part 3
> 
> Dave Orchard writes:
> 
> > I did one small editorial change as suggested by NM,
> 
> Looks good, thanks!
> 
> > I think a bit more wordsmithing is in order for that section as it
now
> seems to read a bit redundant to me.
> 
> 
> FWIW, I'm OK with it as is.
> 
> Found a few other minor things:
> 
> * Typo:  descovers -> discovers
> 
> * Column widths in tables in 2.3 don't look so good in Firefox.
Speaking
> as an experienced editor to a somewhat less experienced editor, you
can
> look forward to hours of fun trying to do tables in a way that look
> reasonable in most browsers, and that don't clip when printed from
those
> browsers.
> 
> * Editorial: suggest first paras of 2.2 be made into one.  I think the
> thoughs go together, and it's less visually choppy that way.  Not
> important obviously.
> 
> Overall, I need to revisit some of David Hull's concerns, but pending
that
> this still looks pretty good to me.  I think the swap of the abnormal
> stuff is an improvement.  Much appreciated.  Thanks!
> 
> Noah
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> "David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
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> 07/20/2006 04:00 PM
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>         To:     <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
>         cc:     (bcc: Noah Mendelsohn/Cambridge/IBM)
>         Subject:        Status and links to Part 3
> 
> 
> I've updated soap12 part3 [1] - first described at [2] - and checked
the
> files into cvs.  I did one small editorial change as suggested by NM,
> which was to move the abnormal operation material a little lower.  I
think
> a bit more wordsmithing is in order for that section as it now seems
to
> read a bit redundant to me.
> 
> David Hull had a large number of substantial comments, suggestions,
and
> rewrites such as [3], [4].  However, it's not clear to me if these are
> still held to or not.
> 
> From an editorial perspective, I think we are up to date on the
drafts. My
> work here is done.  The WG can always instruct me to make subsequent
> changes to the docs.
> 
> Cheers,
> Dave
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/6/soap12-part3
> [2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/2006Jun/0000.html
> [3] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/2006Apr/0020.html
> [4] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/2006Jun/0004.html
> 
> Ps. This is my 5th set of activity in w3c cvs this week.  Previous
items:
> TAG versioning finding, TAG minutes, ws-policy edits, xml schema 1.1
> versioning guide.  When it rains, it pours!
> 
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