Comments for WD-xinclude-20010516

These are comments for your XInclude Last Call Working Draft [1].
It is beautifully written.

You might consider using divs rather than tables for examples. The
editors of XML Schema Part 1-3 do this; (see
http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/). In your case, there would be no
need to nest divs. One-column tables are of relatively minor concern
but they seem to go against Web content accessibility guideline 3; (see
http://www.w3.org/TR/WAI-WEBCONTENT/#gl-structure-presentation).

Globally, XML Schema -> XML schema (unless referring to the name of the
W3C schema specification)

Below a section name or number is followed by a quote and then a
suggestion.

Abstract
URI References
URI references (unless referring to the BNF itself in RFC 2396,
in which case it would be URI-Reference)

Status of this document par. 1
Last Call working draft
Last Call Working Draft (to match the W3C Process Document, see
http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/)

Status par. 4
XML Activity Statement.
XML Activity statement.

3. par. 1
refered
referred

3. href
URI Reference
URI reference

spec is a little informal; I'd say:
specification

4.2.1 Note
whitespace (twice)
white space (if you want to follow XML 1.0, see
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#sec-white-space)

4.4.1 par. 3 and 4.4.2 par. 3
useage
usage

5.2 list item 1
XML Namespaces
XML namespaces, or Namespaces in XML

A. Unicode
Standard.(See
Standard. (See

A. XML
     Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, and C.M. Sperberg-McQueen, editors.
     Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0. World Wide Web Consortium,
     1998.
could read:
     Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, C.M. Sperberg-McQueen, and Eve Maler, editors.
     Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Second Edition). World Wide
     Web Consortium, 1998.

A. XML Names
"Textuality, Hewlett-Packard, and Microsoft." can be omitted.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-xinclude-20010516/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/

Received on Saturday, 19 May 2001 23:53:23 UTC