[Bug 11250] minor editorial improvement : improvements to section "3.7 Model Group Definitions"

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=11250

--- Comment #2 from Mukul Gandhi <gandhi.mukul@gmail.com> 2010-11-10 21:46:31 UTC ---
(In reply to comment #0)
> In the cited <old> text above, the phrase "does not allow them on the child of
> <group> when it is named" appears incorrect (since minOccurs and maxOccurs are
> not child of <group> but ARE attributes). I believe corrected text should be
> somewhat like following, "does not allow them as attributes of <group> when it
> is named" -- which is suggested in the <new> text as above.

It seems I'm only inclined to have the above change go into corrections, and
I'm requesting my other comments (even the one with request to change heading
of the section I pointed to) in this bug report to be canceled.

Thanks.

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