[Bug 11251] New: minor editorial improvement : improvements to section "3.8.1 The Model Group Schema Component"

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=11251

           Summary: minor editorial improvement : improvements to section
                    "3.8.1 The Model Group Schema Component"
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: David_E3@VERIFONE.com
        ReportedBy: gandhi.mukul@gmail.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org
                CC: cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com


In the latest XML Schema 1.1 WD at,
http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2004/06/xmlschema-1/structures.omni.20101029.html I
am able to suggest following improvements to one of the language texts,

In the section "3.8.1 The Model Group Schema Component" it's said:
<quote>
When two or more element declarations contained ·directly·, ·indirectly·, or
·implicitly· in the {particles} of a model group have identical names, the type
definitions of those declarations must be the same.
</quote>

I think this description is probably wrong. The above text seems to convey
that, element declarations having same name must be validated by the same
schema type (in this case, the element declarations belong to model group --
but to my opinion, that doesn't make difference to relationship between an
element declaration and it's schema type with any other case like xs:element
being child of xs:sequence for example).

It probably seems appropriate to me, that the above cited text (within <quote>)
is not at all needed -- so I recommend it to be deleted from the cited section.

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Received on Sunday, 7 November 2010 06:24:39 UTC