[Bug 6008] [schema11] small presumably editorial bugs

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6008


David Ezell <David_E3@VERIFONE.com> changed:

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--- Comment #4 from David Ezell <David_E3@VERIFONE.com>  2009-04-17 16:06:21 ---
6008 (John Arwe): [schema11] small presumably editorial bugs.
http://www.w3.org/XML/Group/2004/06/xmlschema-1/structures.b6008.html

Summary: several small stylistic fixes.

There has been discussion in Bugzilla; amendments are needed.

SG's recommendation: We only have a partial proposal. I can
review items I didn't cover to see whether there is anything else
I can do.

MSM's recommendations:  quick.

   - In 4.2.5.1, deal with John's first point by untagging the
     phrase 'external component references'.  The sentence then
     reads

         Thus, the <import> element information item identifies
         namespaces used in external component references,
         i.e. those whose ·QName· identifies them as coming from a
         namespace different from that of the enclosing schema
         document's targetNamespace.

     The only different from status quo is that 'external
     component references' is roman, not italic.

   - In 2.2.3.1, for the item that now reads

         Disjunction (the element information items match one of
         the particles).

     Do NOT adopt JA's proposal

         Disjunction (the element information items match exactly
         one of the particles).

     Instead, write

         Disjunction (the element information items match one or
         more of the particles).

     for the reasons given in bug 6008 comment 3.

   - Adopt what we have, note that issue is editorial, come back
     to it (and deal with more of it?) after CR.


Sandy has provided a pointer that enumerates the parts of this issue that are
to be done later.
 http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/w3c-xml-schema-ig/2009Mar/0005.html


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