[Bug 5072] minor editorial issues

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5072


cmsmcq@w3.org changed:

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------- Comment #1 from cmsmcq@w3.org  2007-12-27 00:05 -------
Thank you for pointing out these errors.  I'm not sure about the origin of
the '!!', but it seems to have disappeared from the editors' copy of the
spec.  

The extra whitespace in the URL pattern ".../vX.Y/ Ne" appears to
be an artifact of our use of tidy, which introduces a newline at that
point in its output.

In the phrase "14 kinds of component in all", I think different native speakers
may have different intuitions about whether "component" needs to be plural or
not; my own instinct is that it does not, but I am open to persuasion on
the subject.  I notice a number of parallel formulations; some of 
them use plurals and some use the singular, so if we change this one I think
several others should also change.

The missing blank in 2.2.3.1 has been supplied.

I've changed the stylesheet so that it no longer generates that ill-placed
comma in an if/then construct where the condition ends with a numbered list;
in addition to the place you mention there were four others.  

The extra "and only if" in 3.3.5 has been suppressed.  (Or, to be more 
precise, I have prepared a change proposal to make that and the other
corrections necessary here.)

Received on Thursday, 27 December 2007 00:05:17 UTC