[Bug 5141] small editorial changes section 3.4-3.6

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5141

           Summary: small editorial changes section 3.4-3.6
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


3.4.2 XML Representation of Complex Type Definitions, Complex Type Definition
with complex content Schema Component, item 3.1.1
- looks like the property list should be indented further
- lonely period before 3.1.2

3.4.2 XML Representation of Complex Type Definitions, ex 4 after tableau
"A further illustration of the abbreviated form, "
not clear to me what "further" is referring back to.  looks unrelated to
previous.

3.4.3 Constraints on XML Representations of Complex Type Definitions
remove "only" from front of 2.1.2, 2.1.3

3.4.6, Schema Component Constraint: Type Derivation OK (Complex), note 2
"Note: The wording of clause 2.1 above appeals"
unusual space after "Note:" makes reader unsure of scope of non-norm commentary

3.4.6, Schema Component Constraint: Type Derivation OK (Complex), note 2
from: "when the two types definitions in question"
to:   "when the two type  definitions in question"

3.6.1 The Attribute Group Definition Schema Component
from: "{attribute uses} is a set    attribute uses, allowing for"
to:   "{attribute uses} is a set of attribute uses, allowing for"

Received on Monday, 8 October 2007 15:52:33 UTC