Re: "XML Query Algebra" typos

Dear Michael,
Thanks for your detailed comments.  The fixes will appear in the 
next public working draft.  Please don't bill us for your 
editorial services!
Thanks,
Mary


> "XML Query Algebra" typos
> 
> From: Michael Dyck (MichaelDyck@home.com)
> Date: Sat, Dec 23 2000
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> Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2000 18:30:15 -0800
> From: Michael Dyck <MichaelDyck@home.com>
> To: www-xml-query-comments@w3.org
> Subject: "XML Query Algebra" typos
> 
> I found some typos in "The XML Query Algebra", 2000-12-04 working draft.
> Read "->" as "should be replaced by".
> By "example", I mean "<pre> element".
> 
> 1 Introduction
> 2nd para:
>     "long standing" -> "long-standing"
> 
> 4th para:
>     "guarantuee" -> "guarantee"
> 
> 2.10 Sorting
> 1st para:
>     "Note that the variable b appear":
>     "appear" -> "appears"
> 
> 2.15 Functions for all well-formed documents
> 2nd para:
>     "Finally an AnyTree is either..."
>     "AnyTree" -> "AnyType"
> 
> 9th para:
>     "The first branch of the match match expression..."
>     Delete first "match".
> 
> 3.1 Expanded names
> 1st para:
>     "or namespace, local name pairs"
>     Change to "or (namespace, local name) pairs" ?
> 
> 3.2 Wildcards
> Near end of section:
>     "{Namespace}LocalName <:wild {*}*"
>     Italicize "Namespace".
> 
> 4.1 Relating projection to iteration
>     The first four examples use "AnyComplexType", but the last three use
>     "AnyType". Not sure why.
> 
> 4.2 Reducible Expressions
> 1st para:
>     "In these definitions, Exp1 {Exp2/Var} denotes..."
>     In fact, Figure 4 doesn't use that construct. (Figure 5 does though, so
>     maybe "these definitions" was meant to include it.)
> 
> 4.3 Laws
> 7th example:
>     "for a in b do"
>     Shouldn't that be "for a in b/author do" ?
> 
> Figure 5:
>     definition of "E":
>     Maybe change "E" to "E[]"?
>     Also, delete the "|" before "else e".
> 
>     rule 13:
>     "e[e2]" -> "E[e2]"
> 
>     rule 15:
>     On the left-hand side, put the ellipsis between the two "case" lines.
>     Also, "casev" -> "case v".
> 
> last para:
>     "context variable e" -> "context variable E"
>     "e[e]" -> "E[e]"
>     "six expressions" -> "four expressions"
>     The example might be clearer if the two expressions (inner and outer)
>     weren't both for-expressions.
> 
> 5.3 Factoring types
> 3rd example:
>     "String" -> "Integer"
> 
> 4th example:
>     Insert space between "Integer" and "]".
> 
> 5.5 Expressions
> 5th para:
>     "@Name[Data]" -> "@Name[Exp]"
> 
> -Michael Dyck
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