Comments for XPointer Last Call Working Drafts

These are minor editorial comments for your XPointer Last Call Working
Drafts [1,2,3].

In the Status section of all three drafts:

s/W3C members/W3C Members/
s/working draft/Working Draft/
I would spell out WG.

Would it be nice to list editors' names for RFCs?

In the framework:

s/XML Namespace-defined/XML-namespace-defined/ (I think. The name of the
   spec is "Namespaces in XML.")
s/XML Namespaces/XML namespaces/

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-xptr-framework-20020710/
[2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-xptr-xmlns-20020710/
[3] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-xptr-element-20020710/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
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Received on Thursday, 1 August 2002 01:27:18 UTC