minor comments for CR-xmlbase-20000908

These are minor editorial comments for your XML Base Candidate 
Recommendation [1]. Evidently I missed just a few things in the last 
Working Draft.

In 1. par. 1, "stated requirements on XLink" could say, "stated 
requirements of XLink".

In 3. par. 1, "URI Reference" can be lowercase, "URI reference".

In Appendix A, XML Names, "Textuality, Hewlett-Packard, and 
Microsoft." can be omitted.

In Appendix B, XML Infoset, John Cowan appears to be the sole editor.

Finally, a question that arose during this reading. In Appendix C, 
suggesting revisions to other specs (XSLT, XML Schema, XHTML) might 
be out of place, I'm not sure. Is there a Coordination Group that can 
help? It might work to stop short and only give the current situation 
for each one as you do for XPath.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/CR-xmlbase-20000908/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch, W3C
mailto:lesch@w3.org

Received on Tuesday, 12 September 2000 23:05:17 UTC