- From: Eve L. Maler <Eve.Maler@east.sun.com>
- Date: Fri, 07 Jul 2000 14:56:35 -0400
- To: www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org
>Date: Thu, 06 Jul 2000 16:58:38 -0400 >From: Jeffrey Bacon <Jeffrey.Bacon@canada.sun.com> >X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.73 [en] (WinNT; U) >X-Accept-Language: en >To: Eve.Maler@East.Sun.COM >Subject: XML POinter Language Version 1 (June 7th, 2000) > >Eve -- > >I have just finished reading the Candidate Recommendation for XPointer >dated 7 June 2000 and found a couple editorial errors. > >----- >| 1 | >----- >Section 5.4.2 string-range() Function, example 2: > ... the following expression returns ... from the start of the > string) >in the third occurrence... > Example Given: string-range(//P,"Thomas Pynchon",8,0)[17] > >Shouldn't the [17] be [3] ? > >----- >| 2 | >----- >Section 5.4.2 string-range() Function, example 3: > ... Alternatively this could be specified as follows: > (this referring to the above example) > string-range(string-range(//P,"Thomas Pynchon")[17],"P",1,0) > >Again, shouldn't the [17] be [3] ? > >----- >| 3 | >----- >Section 5.4.6 unique Predicate Function > paragraph 2 beneath the count()=1 example: > ... set of smaller locations, as opposed to the range the covers the >same total... > >Shouldn't it be written (range THE covers -> range THAT covers): > ... set of smaller locations, as opposed to the range that covers the >same total... > >-- >Jeffrey Bacon >---------------------------- >Sun Microsystems Canada Inc. >---------------------------- > (613)261-8985 >Jeffrey.Bacon@canada.sun.com > http://york.canada/jeff -- Eve Maler +1 781 442 3190 Sun Microsystems XML Technology Center elm @ east.sun.com
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