minor comments for WD-xmlbase-20000607

These are just a few minor editorial comments for your XML Base [1] 
Last Call draft "work in progress."

XML is a normative reference, but not linked to in the text until 
Appendix C. You might spell out the specification's name "Extensible 
Markup Language (XML) 1.0 [XML]" with a link to #XML the first time 
it is mentioned in the introduction.

2. par. 2 and C. list item 3 could spell out "spec" as "specification."

There are missing space characters in 4. last par. "NOTE:The" and in 
A. Unicode "Standard.(See".

In B. XHTML, "et. al." should read "et al."

Also for C., e-commerce markup uses a "baseurl" [2] that may or may 
not be related to XML Base; (I don't know).

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xmlbase-20000607
[2] http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/WD-Micropayment-Markup-19990825/#Base

Best wishes for your project,

-- 
Susan Lesch, W3C
mailto:lesch@w3.org

Received on Sunday, 11 June 2000 02:03:20 UTC