- From: Jose Kahan <jose.kahan@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 18 Apr 2005 17:41:17 +0200
- To: www-xkms@w3.org
Hi,
I finished updating the changelog[1]. I temporarily left Shivaram's
precedent text right below the new one, just so that people can verify if
I didn't miss any issue. Unless I hear otherwise, I'll remove Shivaram's
old changelog text in 24 h.
I think part-1 is virtually done. There are just two open questions for
Shivaram and we need to update one issue when part-2 is done. You'll find
those questions as a list of all the changes I applied to the spec. here
below.
-jose
[1]
http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Drafts/XKMS-PR-PUB/PR-PUB-xkms-part-1.html#XKMS_2_0_Section_Appendix_F
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To Do:
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[ ] Ask Shiv. if in p. 134 the wording shouldn't be:
In the case of a non-compound request, the operation that completed s/is with/has/
status Success.
[ ] Ask Shiv. why there are some items with '*' in the table below [104].
[ ] Supress the previous changelog info
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Done
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[X] p. [125]
Vamsi: The "ds:signature/ds:signatureValue" representation format syntax
should be replaced by a textual description for consistancy.
Changed to:
The content of the <ds:SignatureValue> element used in the request does not
match the content of the <RequestSignatureValue> element in the response.
[X] 2.5.3.3
The spec doesn't specify how to send notifications. This example is misleading.
Tommy proposes the following text (and I like it):
"The XKMS service notifies the client about the completion of the request
processing using the notification mechanism specified in the
<PendingNotification> element in the initial request".
--> Added Tommy's text and removed the example.
[X] Homogeneize XKISS and XKRSS
Sometimes the spec uses X-KISS, sometimes XKISS. Same thing for XKRSS.
Used X-KISS and X-KRSS throughout
[X] [404] Fix font face for URL
[X] Appendix B move to non normative.
[X] 122 TooManyResponses missing a nbsp;
[X] Tables at p. [120] and [122]
The anyURI prefix description looks ugly. Move it to the preceding par.
[X] Table at [122]. Use of Sender or Receiver for the last three minor codes
Tommy proposes Sender. The text in the spec is not synch. with the
actual values. See [213], [311], [315],
Following a mail exchange with Tommy on the list, and with Shivaram's approval,
modified as follows:
OptionalElementNotSupported Receiver
ProofOfPosessionRequired Sender
TimeInstantNotSupported Receiver
TimeInstantOutofRange Sender
--> related par. updated.
[X] Par. [373a] is missing some articles, but I'm unable to fix it
without knowing what was it supposed to say originally.
Fixed with Shivaram
[X] 124 and 125 add <span class="ID> as needed.
[X] Added par. ID to all the tables in Section 9 and updated the Changelog
reference to [354] (the [354] markup was badly placed). Added captions
and xhtml:thead to these tables.
[X] Together with Shivaram, reorganized table [354d] "Security Bindings" of
Section 9: Conformance
[X] The text in [128a] implied that the RespondWith element couldn't be a
descendant of a CompoundRequest element. Changed the text to say that
it cannot be a direct child, but that it can appear in the inner requests.
[X] Added a missing article in [288] and changed "A second advantage" to
"an advantage".
[X] Added a better description on how pending requests, notification and polling
interact (submitted by TL). Changes to [55], [56]. Inserted new section
2.5.2 describing the Status Request and readjusted the subsequent sibling
section numbers. Added an SMTP notification example to 2.5.4.1.
[X] Removed ResponseMechanism.Represent from [54]
[X] Removed the ResponseId element in 2.5.3. as it was a typo
[X] Update the changelog to reflect all but the minor edits I applied
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