- From: Jose Kahan <jose.kahan@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 18 Apr 2005 17:41:17 +0200
- To: www-xkms@w3.org
Hi, I finished updating the changelog[1]. I temporarily left Shivaram's precedent text right below the new one, just so that people can verify if I didn't miss any issue. Unless I hear otherwise, I'll remove Shivaram's old changelog text in 24 h. I think part-1 is virtually done. There are just two open questions for Shivaram and we need to update one issue when part-2 is done. You'll find those questions as a list of all the changes I applied to the spec. here below. -jose [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Drafts/XKMS-PR-PUB/PR-PUB-xkms-part-1.html#XKMS_2_0_Section_Appendix_F ---------------------- To Do: ---------------------- [ ] Ask Shiv. if in p. 134 the wording shouldn't be: In the case of a non-compound request, the operation that completed s/is with/has/ status Success. [ ] Ask Shiv. why there are some items with '*' in the table below [104]. [ ] Supress the previous changelog info ---------------------- Done ---------------------- [X] p. [125] Vamsi: The "ds:signature/ds:signatureValue" representation format syntax should be replaced by a textual description for consistancy. Changed to: The content of the <ds:SignatureValue> element used in the request does not match the content of the <RequestSignatureValue> element in the response. [X] 2.5.3.3 The spec doesn't specify how to send notifications. This example is misleading. Tommy proposes the following text (and I like it): "The XKMS service notifies the client about the completion of the request processing using the notification mechanism specified in the <PendingNotification> element in the initial request". --> Added Tommy's text and removed the example. [X] Homogeneize XKISS and XKRSS Sometimes the spec uses X-KISS, sometimes XKISS. Same thing for XKRSS. Used X-KISS and X-KRSS throughout [X] [404] Fix font face for URL [X] Appendix B move to non normative. [X] 122 TooManyResponses missing a nbsp; [X] Tables at p. [120] and [122] The anyURI prefix description looks ugly. Move it to the preceding par. [X] Table at [122]. Use of Sender or Receiver for the last three minor codes Tommy proposes Sender. The text in the spec is not synch. with the actual values. See [213], [311], [315], Following a mail exchange with Tommy on the list, and with Shivaram's approval, modified as follows: OptionalElementNotSupported Receiver ProofOfPosessionRequired Sender TimeInstantNotSupported Receiver TimeInstantOutofRange Sender --> related par. updated. [X] Par. [373a] is missing some articles, but I'm unable to fix it without knowing what was it supposed to say originally. Fixed with Shivaram [X] 124 and 125 add <span class="ID> as needed. [X] Added par. ID to all the tables in Section 9 and updated the Changelog reference to [354] (the [354] markup was badly placed). Added captions and xhtml:thead to these tables. [X] Together with Shivaram, reorganized table [354d] "Security Bindings" of Section 9: Conformance [X] The text in [128a] implied that the RespondWith element couldn't be a descendant of a CompoundRequest element. Changed the text to say that it cannot be a direct child, but that it can appear in the inner requests. [X] Added a missing article in [288] and changed "A second advantage" to "an advantage". [X] Added a better description on how pending requests, notification and polling interact (submitted by TL). Changes to [55], [56]. Inserted new section 2.5.2 describing the Status Request and readjusted the subsequent sibling section numbers. Added an SMTP notification example to 2.5.4.1. [X] Removed ResponseMechanism.Represent from [54] [X] Removed the ResponseId element in 2.5.3. as it was a typo [X] Update the changelog to reflect all but the minor edits I applied ---------------
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