Re: oops!

In the "Status of Document" section, para 1, the following sentence needs to be deleted:
 
The XHTML <del> tag is used to indicate previous text, where the <ins> tag indicates newly added (or modified) text.
 
In the same section different para starting with: " The purpose of a W3C CR ..." must be put in past tense.
 
In the same section, last para, starting with "Publication as a CR ...." must be changed too.
 
1.2 Acknowledgements:
Looks like my employer name needs to be prefixed with (formerly Sun Microsystems Inc) and similarly for Stephen Farrell.
 
Do you think I should make these changes?  If you are making changes, I would actually make them in the pre-PR draft version with <ins> and <del> tags so that all changes are correctly captured.
 
/Shivaram

Shivaram Mysore <shivarammysore@yahoo.com> wrote:
Jose,
 
I would also remove the granual date wise change log in Appendix E and just retain "Specification Changes between PR & CR" Section.
 
/Shivaram

Jose Kahan <jose.kahan@w3.org> wrote:
Hi!

The file didn't get mirrored. I fixed it.

On Fri, Apr 01, 2005 at 06:45:36PM +0200, Jose Kahan wrote:
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> [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Drafts/XKMS-PR-PUB/PR-PUB-xkms-part-1.html


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