Some undotted i's

Following is a list of editorial stuff that I have kept note of
over the last while.

In Part 1:

- paragraph [179] refers to TemplateKeyBinding; shouldn't this be
  PrototypeKeyBinding?

- paragraph [115], "nonce attribute" should be "Nonce attribute"

- paragraph [193], "both elements" should be "both attributes"

- paragraph [149], the text states that KeyName and KeyValue are
  requested however in [150] only KeyValue is actually specified
  in request

- paragraph [109] 3.2.4 Element <PendingNotification>
  Table has a column URI; use Mechanism instead?

In Part 2:

- paragrapgh [50] LocateRequest message contains invalid Respondwith
  value <RespondWith>Multiple</RespondWith>

- paragraph [67] "with a value of true" should be "with a value of 1"

- paragraph [68] SOAP 1.1 namespace URI in message should be
  http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/soap/envelope/

- the SOAP 1.2 namespace URI refers to a working draft
  [http://www.w3.org/2002/06/soap-envelope] through out.
  Shouldn't this be http://www.w3.org/2003/05/soap-envelope ?

Regards
Tommy

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