- From: Shivaram Mysore <Shivaram.Mysore@Sun.COM>
- Date: Tue, 1 Oct 2002 08:21:41 -0700 (PDT)
- To: www-xkms@w3.org, pbaker@verisign.com
Here are my partial comments on the 26 Sept Draft: line 51: in <OpaqueClientData> ... "in a request in a response " - this needs to be corrected. Editorial: Tables are going out of the page when I print it is getting cut-off How can we fix this?? line 75: Replace Table Heading "Code" with "ResultMajor Code" line 76: Replacing this with just definitions of Final and Non-Final would be better. - this is a suggestion. line 77: Replace Table Heading "Code" with "ResultMinor Code" line 84: Using <ds:RetrivalMethod> and use of <xkms:dsRetrivalMethod> line 126: Replace KeyBinding with LocateKeyBinding - there is a mismatch between the heading and the schema definition. /Shivaram ___________________________________________________________________________ Shivaram H. Mysore <shivaram.mysore@sun.com> Software Engineer Co-Chair, W3C's XKMS WG Java Card Engineering http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS JavaSoft, Sun Microsystems Inc. Direct: (408)276-7524 Fax: (408)276-7608 http://java.sun.com/people/shivaram (Internal: http://mysore.sfbay/) ___________________________________________________________________________
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