- From: Rathnakumar Kayyar <rkayyar@WSSPL.com>
- Date: Thu, 20 Nov 2003 18:31:07 +0530
- To: "'www-wsa-comments@w3.org'" <www-wsa-comments@w3.org>
Some mistakes (mainly grammatical) I saw while going through. Hope this helps: 1.6.2, para below Fig 2: "..that is where the all the data.."- sentence not proper. 1.7, lines below Fig 3: "..describes the format SOAP messages.." [of missing] 1.7 (2nd para before 2.0) "..is much much clearly..." [much more?] 3.13 4th Para "...between Web service requestors, providers..." [..and providers would read better] 3.14 3rd Para : "...That is be the role of..." Thanks, rk -------------------------------------------------------------- Rathnakumar Kayyar Ph: +91-80-6712645, WebSpectrum Software Pvt Ltd. 6710907,6719134 818, 13th Cross, 7th Block, Jayanagar Fax: 6719308 Bangalore - 560 082 INDIA URL: http://www.wsspl.com -------------------------------------------------------------
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